Great work, Elijah. I especially like your opening paragraphs, which can be some of the most important in a story. Your use of descriptive language is also excellent. And for what it's worth, I agree with your decision to leave the mystery of what your MC saw unrevealed!
Thank you! The opening paragraphs are the most fun to write - but always hard to follow. Really appreciate your opinion, you know what you're talking about!
Great work, Elijah. I especially like your opening paragraphs, which can be some of the most important in a story. Your use of descriptive language is also excellent. And for what it's worth, I agree with your decision to leave the mystery of what your MC saw unrevealed!
Thank you! The opening paragraphs are the most fun to write - but always hard to follow. Really appreciate your opinion, you know what you're talking about!